Sonntag, 25. November 2007

Chapter seven: Father and son (part 2)

Write a different ending of the chapter: "That night, when Alex had gone to sleep, TOM picked up his diary and began writing." (compare p.43, l.34f)
Friday, 8 February

After one month I had my first meeting with Alex.
I'm so glad that he likes me cause I feared Alex hates me because I left him.
That was the greatest day I've ever had.
To have fun with my son gives me a feeling I can't describe.
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4 Kommentare:

  1. Peach ♥´¯)25. November 2007 um 04:49

    hey ho !
    I think, this is a nice idea, how Tom's diary can be !
    To me, the things that you wrote sounds very realistic !

    However I have a little question to the picture, that you chose.
    Why did you decide to take this pic?
    I ask you that, because, I don't know, what this have to do with that situation.

    Anja ♥~

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  2. annek28. November 2007 um 11:36

    I can only agree to what Anja said about your diary entry - well done, Robert!

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  3. Katchen3. Dezember 2007 um 11:21

    Dear Robert
    You make a good "dary-part" ,but the sentence "After one month I had my first meeting with Alex." is wrong,or not?
    Tom had his first meeting with alex after 16 years...
    Or I understand it wrong? o.ô

    I agree with Anja and have the same question "Why did you decide to take this picture" ??

    See you in school!
    >> Katchen <<

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  4. Koray9. Dezember 2007 um 04:47

    ~Hey Robert!~
    You have wrote a good diary-part but why is this day the graetest for Tom?, and I don't wirte, that he has fear for Alex. Do you agree with me?
    I find your last sentence very very good, I like it.

    P.S.:The picture of the car I do not like it is not suitable to your blog

    ~Koray~

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